50 words.
“What went on in that old house on the hill?” the children sang as they skipped around its wraparound porch. It’s exaggerated stories had become almost like nursery rhymes to them. Rooms filled with secrets never to see the light of day. She watched and smiled calmly. They’d never know.
Creepy part 2 starting with her?
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I gotta admit, in my mind when I wrote it there wasn’t any creepiness. I saw her feeling more content than ominous. The last line does leave it up to the reader though. Thanks for reading :)
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Reminds me of the song by pretty reckless. :)
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Lol, I got ominous too. Kinda like, “They’ll never know. Muhahahaa!”
Loving the photography/50 word flash combo thing you’re doing.
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I really appreciate that. I’m glad some of the stories are open to not just one interpretation. I really appreciate the follow. Thanks again.
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All of your photos & even captions are really appealing..you can publish them as a book even
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Thank you. That’s exactly what I’d like to do. Once I have a collection of 50-100 i’d love to publish a book that would double as a photo book and a book of short stories. Thank you for your kind words. I really appreciate kind comments.
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You should. They’re really interesting. And being short, they don’t have the ability to lose the reader in the middle of the read..plus point :)
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It’ll be a fun project once the collection grows.
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